Is anybody willing to help me edit/revise my essay, if I repost for 100 points? It's on the Compromise of 1850, and is supposed to be 250 words (I don't know how long it actually is, though) and I would like somebody skilled in English to help me edit/revise. Thanks!

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Answer 1
I can revise/edit it
Answer 2
meeeeee! meee mee meee!

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Which sentence contains context clues that would help a reader determine the meaning of the italicized word?(1 point)

Ben meekly raised his hand to volunteer for the fundraiser at the end of class on Wednesday.

After the buzzer, he meekly asked the referee for the final score count to see how his team performed.

Abigail meekly waited to sign up for the talent show in her community, despite her fear of an audience.

Cora meekly chose her favorite television station to watch when her friends came over to her house.

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which is the italicized word ?

Write a short story using ALL FIVE POWER WORDS about a cobra seeking revenge after his parents had been killed by a mongoose in the short story Rikki-Tikki-Tavi.
Power Words: Quell, Recluse, Recuperate, Replenish, Repugnant

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Answer:

Explanation:

A few days after I was born, my parents dissapered. I went looking for them and finally found their bodies. Torn apart, mostly gone. they smelled repugnant.

(sorry, my mom is calling me!)

BRAINLIEST Select the correct answers.
Which three details from the “The Emperor’s New Clothes” by Hans Christian Andersen provide the best evidence to support the following claim?The story uses the invisible outfit as a symbol to show the prideful nature of people.

A."But he has nothing at all on!" at last cried out all the people. The Emperor was vexed, for he knew that the people were right; but he thought the procession must go on now!
B.The rogues sat up the whole of the night before the day on which the procession was to take place, and had sixteen lights burning, so that everyone might see how anxious they were to finish the Emperor's new suit.
C."How splendid his Majesty looks in his new clothes, and how well they fit!" everyone cried out. "What a design! What colors! These are indeed royal robes!"
D.And accordingly he praised the stuff he could not see, and declared that he was delighted with both colors and patterns. "Indeed, please your Imperial Majesty," said he to his sovereign when he returned, "the cloth which the weavers are preparing is extraordinarily magnificent."
E.Many years ago, there was an Emperor, who was so excessively fond of new clothes, that he spent all his money in dress. He did not trouble himself in the least about his soldiers; nor did he care to go either to the theatre or the chase, except for the opportunities then afforded him for displaying his new clothes.

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Answer:

E and A

Explanation:

Answer:

d,b,e

Explanation:

Do you guys think I Should ask out my crush (Max Lozano)(my name:Maryah)

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Answer:

Yes gurl i think you should go for it! U got this qween ;) <3

Explanation:

M + M = <3 4L

yes, follow your heart!

Definition of Refuse
A. cutting of dead parts of a plant
C. soft wet mass of material; mush
D. spore-producing organism, such as mold and mushrooms
E. materail in food needed to keep a person alive and healthy
F. material thrown away; garbage
G. tak care of
PLESE HELP ASAP!!!

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Answer:

material thrown away ;)

Explanation:

Answer:

your answer is F. now may i get brainliest for tha gravy train

Explanation:

15 POINTS PLEASE ANSWER FAST

Assignment
What is Important?
Use evidence from the text to support each response. Complete at least one full paragraph for each question.

1. Select one of the stories or poems in this unit and identify the author's purpose for writing. Then, identify
the theme of that same story or poem. What is the difference between the theme and the author's purpose?
Are they the same, or are they different?
Answer:

2. What views about what's important do most of the stories and poems in this unit share? How do the
selections differ in their views of what's important?
Answer:

3. Name two pieces that share a theme and explain how each story develops this theme.
Answer

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what’s the poem? sorry i can’t really tell

Project: Compare the stories.

In this project, you are going to use your critical reading skills to compare and contrast two different stories. You will follow the writing process to write a four-paragraph writing piece comparing "Robin Hood" and "Arthur and the Sword in the Stone."

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Answer:

Wish I could help...

Explanation:

I would help but I cant tell if you posted a file with it so I wish I could help you but Im not sure if there is a pic of the stories.

SORRY!!

Answer:

do you know if anyone else did this i need help

Explanation:

What injustices were Black/African American People fighting against during the Civil Rights Movement?

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They were fighting against segregation. They wanted their rights to be the same as whites because they were all people.

Explanation: They were fighting to end instutionalized racial discrimination, disenfranchisement and racial segregation in the United States.

Nothing But The Truth text
Miss Narwin compares being denied the money for the grant and the music teacher being able to take a summer course for band to ________ and _________ .

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Bread and shows? I think that’s it

too late I must've failed my test >:V

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Answer:

u didnt include the question :(

Explanation:

Uh oh that’s not good

When bees collect pollen, they fertilize the plants that they visit.
Compound or Complex

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Answer: this is a complex sentence

Explanation:

Answer:

complex is the correct answer

Explanation:

could i please have brainliest

In the story ¨The Monkeys Paw¨, how does the author use foreshadowing to contribute to the story´s overall meaning? Explain 2 examples of foreshadowing and how they develop the theme of the story.

Btw, the theme is: ¨...that fate ruled people’s lives, and that those who interfered with it did so to their sorrow.¨

Heres the story if you need it: https://www.kyrene.org/cms/lib/AZ01001083/Centricity/Domain/2259/The%20Monkeys%20Paw%20-%20text.pdf

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Answer:

The author of "The Monkey's Paw" uses the words and behavior of Sergeant-Major Morris as ominous foreshadowing of what is likely to happen to the person who possesses the mummified paw on which an Indian fakir supposedly placed a spell.

Explanation:

Hope this helps! (Please mark Brainliest if possible!!)

3. What is the tone of this poem? (In Flounders Field)
A.Happy
B.Fearful
C.Somber
D.Exciting

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It’s Letter C somber

hii a few questionssss

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Answer: ye they are all correct

Answer:cant see it

Explanation:

(1) In a town full of ordinary pizza parlors, the new Papà’s Pies is a breath of fresh air. (2) The front of the restaurant features floor-to-ceiling windows, so we walked into a bright, airy space, where polished tabletops gleam like jewels, and modern art stands out on the original red brick walls


What type of figurative language is used in sentence 1? What two things are being compared?

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Answer:

T.W.O

Explanation:

T

W

O

Metaphor. Pizza restaurant and air

Explain what the arguments are in Scenario 1 and Scenario 2. Then, explain which one you think is more believable and convincing.

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Answer: Scenario 1, in this argument we discover the opinion that schools should not teach advanced math because they believe that we will only use that math in certain jobs and careers, which we might not even consider taking.

Scenario 2, in this argument we discover the thought of a virus that could possibly destroy colonies of bees.  This virus could mean the end of the beautiful creatures we call bees.

Explanation:Scenario             is more intriguing, believable and convincing. i think this because,

then you will put why you think that the scenario you chose is more believable.

delena or stelena and why
its Delena for me

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Stelena


Explanation: because it’s more unique and underrated

Landform Analogies (part 2) (Look at my other question to know the rules)


A mountain is like () because ()
Give an analogy for this problem

A valley is like a () because ()
Give an analogy for this problem.

A volcano is like a () because ()
Give an analogy for this problem.

An island is like a () because ()
Give an analogy for that problem


() is where you are supposed to put the analogy. Sorry for only 10 points, I'm becoming broke..

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1. A mountain is like a rock because it’s tough and strong.
2. A valley is like a bird because it sways in the wind, it can dip down, and it can be beautiful depending on the time of day.
3. A volcano is like a tiger because it is unreliable and scary.
4. An island is like a depressed person because it is isolated unless someone visits it
Have a good day! I hope these work for you!

Which of the following most likely functions as the resolution in a story? (1 point)
Group of answer choices

We were working to decorate the gym, though our efforts seemed weak.

It was decided. I would go to the school in the fall, despite all my fears.

Several of my friends had offered to help me clean up the spray paint.

Whatever happened, it was going to be a memorable day.

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Answer:

#4. Whatever Happened, it was going to be a memorable day

Explanation:

the answer is #4 because the resolution of a story is the end of a story, the others wouldnt make sense because the would either be at the beginning or middle of the story, I hope this helps

4 is more memorable i feel like

now is this answer correct this is the last one (reading)

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Answer: ur Answer is correct

Answer:

Umm.. Can you please show the text, and answer to part A?

Because the SnapShot computer application boasts such high numbers of users, I believe our school should allow our teachers to teach lessons using this widely loved photo app.

Conclusion paragraph:
Each afternoon outside of the school walls, my friends and I use SnapShot to create meaningful art, so using the app in the classroom would allow us to combine our SnapShot skills with learning. As stated earlier, students will be more enthusiastic about math or science lessons when using a popular computer application to complete projects or homework. Because our school recently added a computer lab, all students would have easy access to the application. Yes, SnapShot should be used in our school.
Which statement best explains the effectiveness of the conclusion paragraph?

A.
The conclusion is effective because it reinforces the author's credibility and accurately restates the essay's thesis statement.

B.
Although the conclusion includes several points that support the main idea, it is ineffective because it fails to use an interesting and powerful closing sentence.

C.
The conclusion is effective because it does not create needless and boring repetition of the essay's main ideas.

D.
Although the conclusion restates the main idea of the essay, it is ineffective because it does not provide a summary of supporting points.

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

It's effective and useful to the user and it may help answer other questions your peers may have

the answer is A because the conclusion is more effective

Can someone please right a rap about B. Smith? You have to grab info about her and write at least 12 lines or more, and make sure its about her! Think of it as writing a poem. Points, branliest, thanks! Just lookup her name and info about her

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Explanation:

hook

You are the apple of my eye

Na, I don't like that

You're the wheels to my ride, keeps me goin'

See I know that she ain't heard nothin' like this

You're my moon in the night, you be glowin'

Cause ain't no better feelin' whenever we kiss

[Pre-Hook]

There's so many things I want to say

But I lose the words when I see your face

They say writing letters is so old fashioned

But this is the best way to describe my affection

Which sentence contains a pronoun with an unclear antecedent?

Several beach-goers got caught in the rip tide when they went swimming.

The puppy and kitten played together while they ate.

Perry dropped his cheese and apple on the floor but then ate it.

The pilot said he would alert the crew when it was time to land.

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Answer:

"perry dropped his cheese...etc."

Explanation:

that's the correct answer, bc the pronoun is "it", and he dropped TWO things, so it's unclear which he ate. hope this helps : )

the one with perry. it does not specify which one he ate. it just says “it” not the “apple” or the “cheese”

Read the following sentence:

Despite Divya's hearing loss, she felt the driving pulse of the music at the concert.

What does the word pulse mean in this context? (1 point)

Group of answer choices

A wave or undercurrent

A fleeting image

A beating rhythm or vibration

A vital life function

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A beating rhythm or vibration
Try filling in pulse with the sentences below and see which one makes the most sense.

True or False Please help me

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Answer:

True

Explanation:

The most popular music from the 1960's is all heavily influenecd rock n roll.

The correct answer is true

Read this excerpt from "The Piñata"

My mother sent me to his home every day in the summer to keep him company. "He has no one," she'd say, "since your nana passed."
He never said much to me. He only gave gruff instructions in broken English and a complaint here and there about how I didn't know Spanish. It was my second summer with him, and I could see why he was always alone.

Why is the narrator telling this tale?

to criticize his family's business practices
to describe his relationship with his grandfather
to illustrate the differences between two cultures
to explain a summer employment experience

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Answer:

b

Explanation:

Answer:

B, to describe his relationship with his grandfather

Explanation:

In addition, the holes and tunnels make walking treacherous for livestock and humans. Moles often push soil and rocks to the surface. This can damage farm equipment used to work crops. In addition, these rocks and the holes can be hazards for cattle or other farm animals that may trip on them. However, these inconveniences hardly justify the fury with which moles have been pursued.

According to the paragraph, which of the following lines states a reason why moles are disliked?

Group of answer choices

The holes and tunnels make walking treacherous for livestock and humans.

Moles often push soil and rocks to the surface.

These inconveniences hardly justify the fury with which moles have been pursued.

This can damage farm equipment used to work crops.

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Answer:

The holes and tunnels make walking treacherous for livestock and humans.

Explanation:

I would choose number 4. The first one could be right, but to be safe choose number four.


Also why are you doing work about moles, this is like the third time i have seen you on here

how do you identify parallel words or phrases?

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“And”or “or” hope this helped

Which statement best represents the controlling idea of the paragraph?
After leaving for college, how many teens actually return to make a life in their small hometowns? According to a national survey, 15 percent of young adults fall in love with their college town and choose to live there. Another 8 percent find themselves pursuing a dream career in a large city. Some young people also move to the wide-open spaces of the country. But for me, there is no better place to live than my hometown, because the people and places will always make it home.

A.
Unlike many young people, I want to live in my hometown as a young adult.

B.
Living in the country is better than living in the city, because the country offers more familiar sights.

C.
While seeking adventure is a valid choice for many people, I prefer to find fulfillment in familiar things.

D.
Many teens do not return to live in their hometowns after college.

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i think the best answer is A
yea i think a is the answer

Read the passage. Which statement would be the best summary to give the argument meaningful context?
The city needs to pass a law saying that drawbridges on the river will be raised and lowered only after 6 P.M. during the week.

A. Many people leave work before 6 P.M. to catch trains or meet friends.
B. The city passes many laws every year to solve problems for its citizens.
C. Many people out for lunch say they are stranded on one side of the river for 30 minutes or more while boats pass through bridges.
D. The river is congested with tall sailboats and cabin cruisers going to and from the harbor.

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I believe the answer would be A
The answer should be B
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