“Mark took a long look around his room. He looked at all the baseball cards he collected. He looked at the action figures he used to play with. He looked at the posters on the wall. He looked at the bed that seems far too small now. He looked out the window at the park where he used to play baseball. It all looked so small now.” What is the issue with this creative writing?
A. It needs to be proofread
B. There are no issues
C. It lacks a variety of sentence structure
D. It is full of clichés

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Answer 1

Answer: D

Explanation: Almost every sentence starts with, “He”, which makes it very repetitive.


Related Questions

he practices hard every day. what is the action verb in the sentence

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Answer:

Explanation:

practices. It implies an action. No other word will do..

Answer : practices

Explanation: it’s the only word that is an action

Read this figure of speech. Decide if it is a metaphor or simile.

The wind is a warrior.

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Answer: It is a metaphor

Explanation:

Answer:

It is a metaphor.

Explanation:

If it was a simile, you would see either the word “like” or “as” in between the words “is” and ”a”. The metaphor is simply stating that the wind is a warrior, not that it is like a warrior.

Can someone plz help me plz I’m begging!! :(

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Answer:2

Explanation:

Can someone help me write an argument essay about wether or not children soldiers should be prosecuted/ punished for their crimes or not.

Please take your time also please cite the website yu found it from

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I'll give you some reasons:
- Child soldiers should not be punished for their crimes because they are children, and were probably forced into war.
- Children in war should be illegal because it is immoral to send under-developed people into something they probably cannot comprehend.
- The children will be scarred and suffer from illness after war.
- They are more defenseless and helpless than adult soldiers.
- They do not pose as big as a threat as adult soldiers, either for their size, intelligence, etc.

Hope this helps!

What was the cultural impact that took place due to the Silk Road

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Answer:

The spread of religion

Explanation:

Through all of the trips made through the silk road, many merchants spread religion and many other ideas.


Write complete sentences in the Past Simple using the words below.

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What words I need them we’re are they ?

How does the conversation between Yegor and Sharov advance the plot?

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Answer:

C

Explanation: It summarizes the reasons why Yegor and Sharov should offer Gerasim a job.

ive been looking and thinking for over an hour, can someone probably help me?

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Answer:

"Her face was pleasant and kind"

Explanation:

Someone else could think differently.

Answer:

Her face was pleasant and

Explanation:

because what is pleasant for someone doesn't have to be pleasant for someone else.

Who can write me a compare and contrast essay on two movies

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Answer:

I can! First off, I will need the prompt, requirements, and the grade level expectations so I can start. I will also need the names and info on the two movies so I can go ahead and watch them.

in the great Gatsby
does Gatsby receive any closure from Daisy? does he find peace with this before he dies explain ​

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Answer

After all Gatsby won Daisy's heart, and they made love before Gatsby left to fight in the war. But Daisy made a promise to wait for Gatsby, but in 1919 she chose instead to marry Tom Buchanan, a young man from a solid, aristocratic family who could promise her a wealthy lifestyle and who had the support of her parents. Wilson goes to Gatsby's house, where he finds Gatsby lying on an air mattress in the pool, floating in the water and looking up at the sky. Wilson shoots Gatsby, killing him instantly, then shoots himself. Nick hurries back to West Egg and finds Gatsby floating dead in his pool.

Which larger shape would be made if the two sections are fitted together?.

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There are shapes which are cut into sections and would be made into a larger shape if they were fitted together. One good example of this would be a half circle and another half circle; because if they were joined together, they would be a full circle.

With this in mind, there are different forms through which smaller shapes can be fitted together to become a larger shape and they could be a half trapezium, etc.

Please note that your question is incomplete so I gave you a general overview so that you could have a better understanding of the concept.

Read more about shapes here:

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Fill in the blank:

When we heard about our teacher’s serious illness, we visited him daily in the hospital to ______________ his morale

annul

blasé

bolster

deplore

frivolous

muster

nonentity

obsess

ornate

oust

peruse

porous

promontory

prone

qualm

recourse

residue

solicitous

staid

sustain

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Answer:

Hello

The answer is bolster

100 POINTS TO WHOEVER ANSWERS FIRST and brainiest.
Which describes the introduction to the essay?

1. It has two paragraphs: one for the thesis and one for the background.
2. It has a wide focus: one that includes a variety of theories.
3. It states a contradiction: one that the conclusion corrects.
4. It states the main point: one that is not fully answered in the essay.

Please answer Quickly

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Answer:

the first option

Explanation:

Answer: A

Explanation:

Hannah and her mother are at the supermarket. They are waiting in line for a cashier. Hannah's mother has a shopping cart full of groceries.

HANNAH: (Very excited): The thing about Sherlock Holmes, Mom, is that he sees things that other people don't. He uses his powers of observation and deduction to solve crimes. He has incredible knowledge of crimes and villains and the many dastardly deeds they engage in to break the law. He uses his wit and courage, too.

HANNAH'S MOTHER: (Partly distracted, answering while choosing a checkout line to stand in) Dastardly deeds? That's an interesting phrase. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. In fact, you seem happy as a dog with two tails at the moment.

HANNAH: (Feeling thoughtful and confident) Well, maybe that's because I've decided that I'm going to be an investigator.

From The Mystery of the Shiny Paper:

Hannah started to think about Holmes' many skills and character traits. The skills he relied on most of all were observation and deduction. Sherlock Holmes paid a lot of attention to detail and would often notice things that other people missed. Hannah decided that this was where she would start on her road to becoming a detective—observing others and attempting to deduce information from her observations. She spent the rest of the walk back to her house observing others and trying to come up with detective-like deductions.

A few days later, she was at the supermarket with her mother, still trying to hone her investigative skills by observing others, when she thought to herself: This is hopeless. I don't have any chance of solving a mystery! She felt a bit down on the way home and her mom asked her twice if she was feeling okay. "I'm okay, Mom," was all she said.


What are the differences in the way Hannah's thoughts, feelings, and actions are shown in the play A Daring and Dastardly Deed and the story The Mystery of the Shiny Paper? Use complete sentences and evidence from the texts to answer the question.

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Answer:

Well, in play A Daring and Dastardly Deeds, Hannah is happy and excited by the thought of being a detective, as shown when she skips around and eagerly tries to do what she reads about Sherlock Holmes doing by "observing others and deducing" something about them by watching closely in attempts to notice something that everyone else is oblivious to.

In play B The Mystery of the Shiny Paper, Hannah seems upset at her previous hopes of being a detective because every time she tries to be observant, she can't find anything interesting or out of the ordinary that she would consider something deduced in a detective-like manner, leaving her feeling discouraged and unhappy, both of which were directly stated in text as the narrator gave Hannah direct characterization repeatedly.

(I apologize if this is wrong or too long or something, this was just my attempt at being logical '^^)

Explanation:

Fill in the sentences.
1. Relief at being alive and __________________________at his captive plight brought a strange
medley of pious thank offerings. (p. 153 “The Interlopers”)

2. He looked across at the man who was fighting so grimly against pain and exhaustion…pain and
_______________________. (p. 154 “The Interlopers”)

3. He was peering through the tree trunks and listening through the whistling and _______________
of the wind. (p. 152 “The Interlopers”)

4. For a space of time, both men were silent, turning over in their minds the wonderful changes that this dramatic _________________________ would bring. (p. 154 “The Interlopers”)

5. “A famous lawsuit, in the days of his grandfather, had wrested the land from the illegal possession
of a neighboring family of petty landowners; the ___________________________ party had never
acquiesced in the judgment of the courts.” (p. 152 “The Interlopers”)

Abjure, Acumen, Chromosome, Feckless, Loquacious, Adverse, Discreet, Discrete, Peruse, Renown, Acquiesce, Languor, Pious, Retort, Succor, Skirling, Reconciliation, Exasperation, Plight, Dispossessed.

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Answer:

1st one is exasperation

2ND ONE IS languor

3rd one is skirling

4th one is reconciliation

5th one is dispossessed

Explanation:

so

1. Relief at being alive and  exasperation  at his captive plight brought a strange

medley of pious thank offerings

2. He looked across at the man who was fighting so grimly against pain and exhaustion…pain and languor

3.He was peering through the tree trunks and listening through the whistling and skirling

4. For a space of time, both men were silent, turning over in their minds the wonderful changes that this dramatic reconciliation would bring.

5. “A famous lawsuit, in the days of his grandfather, had wrested the land from the illegal possession

of a neighboring family of petty landowners; the dispossessed party had never

acquiesced in the  judgment of the courts.”

From David :)

write a story with the following title: A bus journey I will never forget​

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Answer:

write about how you and your freinds are going on a tour to egypt and how some crazy adevent(you chose) and how you got out of it and what youve learned

Explanation:

In the book “nobody knows but you” what’s one subordinated character and a passage that revels his/her character traits (needs this done asp).

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Answer:i dont know sorry

Explanation: i dont know sorry

You observe a car parked on the side of the road. If the car started to move, Which conclusion could you make?

A. The forces were balanced when the car was parked, but one or more forces changed. The total forces became unbalanced, causing it to move.

B. The forces were unbalanced when the car was parked. When the car moved, they became balanced.

C. The forces were balanced when the car was parked. The forces stayed balanced when it moved.

D. The forces were unbalanced when the car was parked, and two or more forces changed. The forces stayed unbalanced and caused the car to move.

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Answer:

I would assume that the correct answer is D

Explanation:

Considering that unbalanced forces often make objects teeter and set it in motion, this answer seems the most logical to me, though I apologize if I'm incorrect.

Answer:

A

Explanation:

The forces were balanced when the car was parked, but one or more forces changed. The total forces became unbalanced, causing it to move.

How did Benjamin react to his brother's confinement?

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Answer: What book!

Explanation:

why do you think sarah goods husband testifies against her ? give evidece for your resoning

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Because he was not treated week by her and was afraid of his wife.

Which of the following are limits on the president's power?
Select TWO answers.

A
reprieves and pardons for federal crimes only
B
removable by impeachment
C
prevented from engaging in foreign policy

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Answers B and C!!! Both limit presidential powers

Define temple . And give some examples​

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A temple is a building reserved for spiritual rituals and activities such as prayer and sacrifice. eg . synagogue

Answer:

A building devoted to the worship, or regarded as the dwelling place, of a god or gods or other objects of religious reverence is called temple..

I HOPE IT IS HELPFUL

In the song "Rumor has it" by Adele
What figurative language is in her song?

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Answer:

metaphors, personification, and hyperboles:))

Explanation:

ex: "rumor has it" claiming that the rumor has the capabilities to have something within its grasp

Grandpa: you can’t have phones within 15 feet of the table Me: and you aren’t allowed within 100 feet of the elementary school.

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d amn ok nice story dude

So why is he allowed around you Iol

The Attack on Pearl Harbor
I need help write 2 paragraph about the attack on Pearl Harbor
I will give you brainly if you help

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Answer:

ONE PARAGRAPH

The attack on Pearl Harbor nb 3 10 was a surprise military strike by the Imperial Japanese Navy Air Service upon the United States against the naval base at Pearl Harbor in Honolulu Territory of Hawaii just before 08:00 on Sunday December 7, 1941

TWO PARAGRAPH

Part of the Asiatic-Pacific Theater of World War II

Japan intended the attack as a preventive action Its aim was to prevent the United States Pacific Fleet from interfering with its planned military actions in Southeast Asia against overseas territories of the United Kingdom the Netherlands and those of the United States

what types of energy transformation take place in battery operated radio​

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Answer:

A battery.

Explanation:

#carry on learning

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What town is colonel sherburn from in huck Finn

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Answer:

Colonel Sherburn is a denizen of "a little one-horse town in a big bend" in Arkansas who appears in chapters 21 and 22 of Adventures of Huckleberry Finn.

Explanation:

According to the internet it's Arkansas

Hello! I need help ASAP!!! Ill reward 15 points and mark brainlist for correct answer.
Which sentence contains an allusion?
A. Just because she can draw doesnt mean shes some picasso.
B. Jill is an oak; no matter what you say to her, she wont react.
C. The angry river swooped around the bend to decive us.
D. Im as angry as a badger that I didnt win the drama contest.

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Answer:

c

C

C

C

C

C

C

C

Explanation:

Answer:

c

Explanation:

rannie, liam joel and piper each own a pet. rannie likes to hear his pet sing

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Answer:

Rannie, Liam, and Piper each own a pet. Rannie likes to hear his pet sing.

Explanation:

If in this question you are asking to correct the grammar in the sentence, I capitalized the first letters of each persons name because they are what is called proper nouns . The names of people places or corporations . For example: Person: John   Place: Jamaica  Corporation or organization: Cherry County High School , Forever 21 or Amazon. When you are writing things in a list form  in a sentence there has to be a space after each item or thing that you are listing, but before you list the last last thing that you have on your list you should include a conjunction. Conjunctions connect different possibilities or options in a sentence.

Example: "Would you like to eat pizza, rice or sushi?"  Or " I would like some strawberries, tomatoes and potatoes from the store".

Adding commas prevent a boring runny sentence like, "Would you like some pizza and rice and sushi?"

Note: It is important that when you are writing that  you don't add conjunctions after every word . Its better to list all the items and before you add your last option use a conjunction and end your sentence with your last option.

3.  If you notice , after the period the word pet I added a period and capitalized Rannie. Rannie is a proper noun so it is capitalized but whenever you complete a sentence using a period (.) You start your new sentence with a capital letter .

Example: I went to the Amazon yesterday. I found the new iPhone at the store and it was on sale so I bought it. After I bought the phone I went home.

i'll mark brainliest. serious answers please.

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Answer: A his refusal to answer questions

Explanation:

C)His literacy and inability to write.
Explanation:
Being a king u need to learn to learn the rules in the family, being alliterate and having an inability in writing will definitely cause doubts among the authenticity.
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