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Caro is revising her narrative and focusing on her opening paragraph.


Captain Bernard braced himself against the ship's sturdy mast. There was no turning back. The storm chasing the pirate's ship through the narrow channel was far more deadly than the dozens of imperial ships waiting for him on the open sea. He advised his small and plucky crew to sail “dead ahead," hoping it wouldn't actually come to that.


How can Caro improve this paragraph to better establish the context of her story?


A.

She could add details that tell who the story’s characters are.

B.

She could add a detail or two about when the story takes place.

C.

She should add more details explaining the what and why of the story.

D.

She should not change anything. The paragraph already tells the who, what, when, where, and why of the story.

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Answer 1

Answer:

i think its b

Explanation:

Caro is revising her narrative and focusing on her opening paragraph.

Captain Bernard braced himself against the ship's sturdy mast. There was no turning back. The storm chasing the pirate's ship through the narrow channel was far more deadly than the dozens of imperial ships waiting for him on the open sea. He advised his small and plucky crew to sail “dead ahead," hoping it wouldn't actually come to that.

How can Caro improve this paragraph to better establish the context of her story?

A.

She could add details that tell who the story’s characters are.

B.

She could add a detail or two about when the story takes place.

C.

She should add more details explaining the what and why of the story.

D.

She should not change anything. The paragraph already tells the who, what, when, where, and why of the story.

Answer 2

Caro can improve the paragraph by adding a detail or two about when the story takes place. The correct option is b.

What is a paragraph?

A paragraph is a series of related sentences developing a central idea, called the topic. Paragraphs are the building blocks of papers. Many students define paragraphs in terms of length: a paragraph is a group of at least five sentences, a paragraph is half a page long, etc. In reality, though, the unity and coherence of ideas among sentences is what constitutes a paragraph.

A paragraph is defined as a group of sentences or a single sentence that forms a unit. Length and appearance do not determine whether a section in a paper is a paragraph. For instance, in some styles of writing, particularly journalistic styles, a paragraph can be just one sentence long.

Thus, a paragraph is a sentence or group of sentences that support one main idea.

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Comparing The Giver and The Hunger Games.
must be in ceeeeeer format (claim.evidence, explanation, explanation, evidence, ex, ex, restate claim) and its comparing them being dystopias
WILL GIVE BRAINLIEST!!

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i cant fully write it for you i’m sorry but i can give you some reasons as to why they are a lot alike.
for example the hunger games includes people that are higher up. so does the giver
the giver is like a futeristic setting and so is the hunger games
for your body paragraph include 2 reasons( the ones i gave above) about how they are alike and then include two peices of evidence and then you can explain what the evidence means and what the author is trying to describe by the evidence. for your evidence you could find a part in the story that explains how things aren’t the same as they are now and you could explain that the hunger games is the same way. i’m sorry i couldn’t write it out for u but i hope this helped u and can guide u how to write it.

What is a warrant?
(This is in context of writing an argumentative essay, not law.)

Answer Choices:
A. The way in which evidence supports a claim
B. An appeal to logic or reason
C. An appeal to fear
D. An argument

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Answer: A

Explanation:A way in which evidence supports the claim.

What is a warrant?

(This is in context of writing an argumentative essay, not law.)

A. The way in which evidence supports a claim

Ack Ack wait it would be A not B since thats the reason but the warrant supports the claim

Yes, because she is young. As a young character, she can encourage other girls around her age, or even above, to fight for their rights. Because young characters can influence other people to...

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Malala is young. Is she a good figure to fight for girls’ education? Why or why not?

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Answer and Explanation:

Yes, because she is young. As a young character, she can encourage other girls around her age, or even above, to fight for their rights. Because young characters can influence other people to value the strength of youth. By seeing characters who are young and who are capable of promoting serious and important changes in society, people can value youth, considering young people as important and influential people for the whole of society. It also allows young people to recognize their strength and start looking for change.

Which body paragraph does the counter-claim and rebuttal go

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Usually I put it in paragraph 4, the paragraph BEFORE your conclusion. Someone pls correct me if I’m wrong.

1. Intro
2. Body paragraph 1
3. Body paragraph 2
4. Counter-claim/rebuttal
5. Conclusion

What happens when the moon is directly between the Earth and Sun?

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Answer: When the Moon passes between Sun and Earth, the lunar shadow is seen as a solar eclipse on Earth.

Explanation: When Earth passes directly between Sun and Moon, its shadow creates a lunar eclipse. Lunar eclipses can only happen when the Moon is opposite the Sun in the sky, a monthly occurrence we know as a full Moon. During a lunar eclipse, Earth comes between the Sun and the Moon, blocking the sunlight falling on the Moon. There are two kinds of lunar eclipses: A total lunar eclipse occurs when the Moon and Sun are on opposite sides of Earth. A partial lunar eclipse happens when only part of Earth's shadow covers the Moon.

Explanation:

The lunar shadow is shown on earth and is known as a solar eclipse

How do you find a problem and solution to a text?​

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Answer:

How to Identify Problem and Solution

   Identify the issue.

   Explain how people tried to resolve it or how it was actually resolved.

   Recognize which details expand on the problem, which expand on the solution and which ones are not important to the main idea of the text.

Explanation:

I need a help about “The Crucible”

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Answer:

how are suppose to help you

Explanation:

What kind of help do you need?

In Scene 1, N1 says, “The setting sun casts long shadows, making the boys seem taller than they are.” What is the symbolic meaning of this line?

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Answer:

I Don't know

Explanation:

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Hi. I think this was the question you were referring to:

1. In Scene 1, N1 says, “The setting sun casts long  shadows, making the boys seem taller than they  are.” What is the symbolic meaning of this line?

A. The kids in Langston’s neighborhood are not as  important or powerful as they seem.  

B The boys across the street are younger than  Langston thinks.  

C The night is full of danger.  

D In the morning, Langston will understand why  his grandmother stopped him from playing.  

Answer:

I think the answer is D In the morning, Langston will understand why his grandmother stopped him from playing.  

I really hope that is correct! Have a good day ^^

Hannah dipped her paintbrush into a new color and began painting a delicate vine of flowers on her canvas. Painting always helped her think, and she needed to come up with an idea. Her sister Brianna had graduated from high school yesterday, and she wanted to do something special to show Brianna how proud she was of what she had accomplished. Yesterday, Hannah had told Brianna that she had a special surprise planned, but that was just to buy herself more time to come up with something.
Hannah sighed, her eyes falling on her sister's diploma, freshly hung on the wall of their shared bedroom in a plain wooden frame. She wanted to do something memorable for her sister. From the diploma in the plain frame, her eyes fell to her paintbrush. With a grin, Hannah realized she had the perfect idea for a surprise.
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What will Hannah do to surprise Brianna?
A.
She will paint the plain wooden frame of Brianna's diploma.
B.
She will make Brianna a painting to hang next to her diploma.
C.
She will bake Brianna a cake that looks like her diploma.
D.
She will buy a fancy new frame for Brianna's diploma.

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A. She will paint the plain wooden frame of Briannas diploma.

I say this because she said her eyes looked from the plain wooden frame to her paintbrush and then grinned and realized she had an idea for her surprise

What is the best approach to writing a poem that expresses a common or universal theme?
A- Choose words that express your thoughts feelings about a topic.
B-Decide on a theme and write it in as many different ways as you can.
C-Gradually build a logical argument in support of a common idea.
D-Organize a series of events that demonstrate a commonly held idea.

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Answer:B or A

Explanation:

the answer is (c) gradually build a logical argument in support of a common idea

Source (Topic) What role does music play in our life?

What could be the main idea???

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Answer:

The main idea could be about how music can calm us down what music can help with. there is multiple right options you could go with

A farmer sells 8.4 kilograms of pears and apples at the farmer's market. 3 4 of this weight is pears, and the rest is apples. How many kilograms of apples did she sell at the farmer's market?

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Answer:

Weight of apples = 2.1 kg

Explanation:

Total kilograms of pears and apples = 8.4kg

Pears = 3/4 of the total weight

= 3/4 × 8.4

= (3*8.4) / 4

= 25.2 / 4

= 6.3 kg

Weight of pears = 6.3kg

Let Weight of apples = x

Total weight = Weight of pears + Weight of apples

8.4 = 6.3 + x

x = 8.4 - 6.3

x = 2.1 kg

Weight of apples = 2.1 kg

Write an essay to explain factors that influence teenage decision making. Use the
information from the passages in your essay.

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Answer:

Ok this is probably late since I just got this as a district writing FSA sample thing but you can write about peer pressure, mental health (specifically depression) and how rewards impact decision making. :)

Can someone read 8, and write the answer in their own words?? I would really appreciate it!

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Explanation:

Forcing means to force someone to do someone elses bidding

Which is a theme of the passage

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Answer:

Where??

Explanation:

In his speech beginning in line 51 and ending in line 58, Capulet's frequent
interruptions of his words to Tybalt show that Capulet is-
Lines 51-58:
CAPULET: Go to, go to:
You are a saucy boy. Is't so, indeed?
This trick may chance to scathe you, I know
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what.
You must contrary me! marry, 'tis time.--
Well said, my hearts! You are a princox: go:
Be quiet, or--More light, more light!-- For shame!
I'll make you quiet.--What, cheerly, my hearts!
O confused by what is going on around him
O not sure he really disagrees with Tybalt about Romeo's presence
O trying to be a good host even while arguing with Tybalt
O attempting to reassure Tybalt that he is not angry with him

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In this play tybalt and paris will die as well as romeo and juliet

What do you think will happen in this story? Will Odysseus’s men follow his orders? Why or why not?

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--Because his men disobey when he commands them to stop plundering and return to the ship, Odysseus returns to the ship and hopes the men will follow. - Because his men disobey when he commands them to stop plundering and return to the ship, Odysseus refuses to help them fight the army of Cicones.

EASY POINTS!!!!
What do you see in the picture?

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a river lol

Explanation:

Excerpt from Stuff Matters

By Mark Miodownik

In the absence of copper, gold, and meteoric iron, our ancestors’ tools during the Stone Age were made of flint, wood, and bone. Anyone who has ever tried to make anything with these kinds of tools knows how limiting they are: if you hit a piece of wood it either splinters, cracks, or snaps. The same is true of rock or bone. Metals are fundamentally different from these other materials because they can be hammered into shape: they flow, they are malleable. Not only that, they get stronger when you hit them; you can harden a blade just by hammering it. And you can reverse the process simply by putting metal in a fire and heating it up, which will cause it to get softer. The first people to discover these properties ten thousand years ago had found a material that was almost as hard as a rock but behaved like a plastic and was almost infinitely reusable. In other words, they had discovered the perfect material for tools, and in particular cutting tools like axes, chisels, and razors. This ability of metals to transform from a soft to a hard material must have seemed like magic to our ancient ancestors.

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In 1961 Professor Richmond from Oxford University discovered a pit that had been dug by the Romans in AD 89. It contained 763,840 small two-inch nails, 85,128 medium nails, 25,088 large nails, and 1,344 extra-large sixteen-inch nails. The hoard was of iron and steel and not gold, which most people would have found bitterly disappointing. But not Professor Richmond. Why, he asked himself, would a Roman legion bury seven tons of iron and steel? The legion had been occupying the advance headquarters of Agricola in a place called Inchtuthil in Scotland. This was at the outer reaches of the Roman Empire, and their mission was to protect its border from what they saw as the savage tribes who threatened it: the Celts. The legion of five thousand men occupied the region for six years before retreating and, in the process, abandoning their fort. They made great efforts to leave behind nothing that could help their enemies. They smashed all food and drink containers and burned the fort to the ground. But they weren’t satisfied with this. In the ashes were the steel nails that had held the fort together, and they were far too valuable to be left to the tribes that had driven them out. Iron and steel were the materials that enabled the Romans to build aqueducts, ships, and swords; they allowed them to engineer an empire. Leaving the nails to their enemies would have been as useful as leaving a cache of weapons, so they buried them in a pit before marching south.
Which line from the excerpt provides context that supports the meaning of the word malleable?

a) metals are fundamentally different

b) hammered into shape

c) they flow

d ) stronger when you hit them

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Answer:

b) hammered into shape

Explanation:

According to the excerpt from Stuff Matters by Mark Miodownik, it is narrated that metals were a great discovery which replaced the use of stones and bones as they were easily malleable unlike the other previously used material.

The line from the excerpt that provides context that supports the meaning of the word malleable is "hammered into shape". This is because for a thing to be malleable, it means that it its shape can be easily altered.

Read this excerpt from "Rose's Birthday Present" by Marie E. C. Delbrassine.

"Where is Rose?" "Busy, as usual, with her mice and beetles, I suppose, father," answered Ethel; "we have not seen her all this afternoon." "She will probably be with you at teatime," said Dr. Sinclair, "after which I should like you to ask her to come to me for a little while in the surgery." "Very well, father, I won't forget."

Dr. Sinclair retreated again to his surgery, which was arranged also as his library, knowing that his willing helper would not fail to join him there.

What is the correct way to separate the dialogue in this excerpt?

"Where is Rose?" "Busy, as usual, with her mice and beetles, I suppose, father," answered Ethel; "we have not seen her all this afternoon."

"She will probably be with you at teatime," said Dr. Sinclair, "after which I should like you to ask her to come to me for a little while in the surgery."

"Very well, father, I won't forget."
"Where is Rose?"

"Busy, as usual, with her mice and beetles, I suppose, father," answered Ethel; "we have not seen her all this afternoon." "She will probably be with you at teatime," said Dr. Sinclair, "after which I should like you to ask her to come to me for a little while in the surgery." "Very well, father, I won't forget."
"Where is Rose?"

"Busy, as usual, with her mice and beetles, I suppose, father," answered Ethel; "we have not seen her all this afternoon."

"She will probably be with you at teatime," said Dr. Sinclair, "after which I should like you to ask her to come to me for a little while in the surgery."

"Very well, father, I won't forget."
"Where is Rose?"

"Busy, as usual, with her mice and beetles, I suppose, father," answered Ethel; "we have not seen her all this afternoon."

"She will probably be with you at teatime," said Dr. Sinclair, "after which I should like you to ask her to come to me for a little while in the surgery." "Very well, father, I won't forget."

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Answer:

It’s either 1 or the 3rd one. Sorry if this is wrong but it seems more right

Explanation:

what changes would you like to make in society if you get the opportunity

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Answer:

Everything

Explanation:

Very little in our society should stay the same. If you look at the roots everything is so messed up and tangled. If I had the chance everything would be different. Hopefully cleaner too.

GIVING BRAINLIEST FOR WHO ANSWERS THIS CORRECTLY HURRY PSuppose you were to forejudge that the burgers at Donna’s Dank Diner are moldy and stinky. How would you react?

A
On your first visit, you wouldn’t even consider ordering a burger.

B
You'd try the burgers and decide that they stink.

C
You'd predict that Donna will be judged by others.LEASE!!

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it’s not b because you’ve already decided your opinion before you go so i thinks it’s a

Answer:

A

Explanation:

URGENT

Which of the following events represents the climax of the chapter "The Last Night" in The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde?
A. Poole and Utterson find a document advising Utterson to read the letter from Lanyon
B. Utterson and Poole break down the door and find Hyde’s body
C. Poole stops by Utterson’s house because he is concerned about Jekyll
D. Poole knocks on the lab door and tells Jekyll that Utterson is there to see him, but Jekyll refuses to see anyone

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Answer:

D. Poole knocks on the lab door and tells Jekyll that Utterson is there to see him, but Jekyll refuses to see anyone

Explanation:

it's it didn't work then it may be A. Poole and Utterson find a document advising Utterson to read the letter from Lanyon

Which is the closest synonym for the word empower?
A
neglect
B
enable
С
insult
D
exile

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Answer:

B

Explanation:

Which statement best describes how the compare-and-contrast pattern of the
text supports the author's purpose?
A. The passage begins by describing the benefits of plastic and ends
by comparing these benefits with the benefits of aluminum.
O B. The passage begins by listing all the benefits of plastic and
aluminum and ends by listing all the weaknesses of the two
materials.
C. The passage begins by describing the disadvantages of plastic
and ends by explaining how aluminum has many advantages over
plastic.
D. The passage begins by describing the advantages of aluminum
and ends by contrasting these with the disadvantages of plastic.
Km

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Answer:

C by describing the disadvantages

Explanation:

Why is Beah so angry at being asked for his birth certificate? (A Long Way Gone)

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Answer:

Hes frustrated about how little people know about the war. and is mad that documents like that exist in battle torn areas

Explanation:

Ishmael wants to tell his story rather than choosing silence. He's frustrated with how little the outside world understands about the civil war in Sierra Leone. When the counter clerk at the embassy requests his birth certificate, Ishmael is furious that they should think documents like that exist in the war-torn areas.

Ethos: Using ethos, convince the adults in your life that you should get a
new car.

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About 50% of 16 year-olds have their own car! I need a new car to be able to transport myself without having to bother you. Not only would a new car help me it’d help you out too! New cars show as substantial rise in safety, comfort and performance. My safety is a priority at the end of the day and you shouldn’t need to worry about it!

How effective do you think the structure of King’s argument is in this passage?


very effective

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The structure of King’s argument  in this passage is very effective.

Thus, the correct option is A.

What is an argument?

An argument is a statement or set of claims, known as premises, that seeks to assess the plausibility or acceptability of a conclusion. The logical, dialectical, and rhetorical perspectives are the three basic areas of study for arguments.

An argument in logic can be defined as any group of propositions of which one is claimed to follow from the others through deductively valid inferences that preserve truth from the premises to the conclusion.

Arguments in logic are typically expressed not in natural language but in a symbolic formal language. This logical approach to argumentation is applicable to the sciences, including computer science and mathematics.

Logic is the study of how arguments are reasoned and the creation of norms and criteria for judging arguments.

Deductive arguments can be sound and the sound ones can be valid: in a sound argument, true premises necessitate a true conclusion; in a valid argument, true premises necessitate a true conclusion, even if one or more of the premises are false and the conclusion is wrong.

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Riddle: 3/7 chicken,2/3 cat, 1/2 goat. what is the name of the city?

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Answer:

what is your question?

Explanation:

Answer:  Easy, I know this one.

Explanation:

The city is Chicago.

CHICKEN:it is seven lettered word.so,we will extract the letters out of it as per the given fraction,i.e. 3/7. The letters thus exracted are first 3 letters of the word,which are CHIC.

CAT:this is a three lettered word.So,we will extract first two letters from it(as per the given fraction,that is 2/3).So,the extracted letters are CA.

GOAT:this is a four lettered word.So,we will extract the first two letters out of it(as the given fraction is 2/4).So,the extracted letters are GO.

CHI + CA + GO = Chicago

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essay on my school for class 9

please give me the answer of this question


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Answer:

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Explanation:

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