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Read the rough draft of a student’s conclusion to an argumentative editorial.

(1) Year-round schooling would help student achievement. (2) Not so much information would have to be crammed into nine months. (3) Furthermore, the elimination of long breaks, particularly summer break, would significantly reduce "learning loss” and the additional time wasted at the beginning of each academic year to reteach previously learned material. (4) It is clear that year-round schooling helps students learn and retain more. (5) The United States is not the only country to experiment with a year-round school schedule. (6) Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and see that students in these schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars. (7) It is about time that we replaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.

Which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone?

Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, studies consistently reveal that year-round students score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.
Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, this theory is wrong because students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.
Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, they would admit defeat if only they would do their research and find that students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.
Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, these people need to study their facts and acknowledge that students in year-round schools consistently score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.

Answer: Although many still claim that evidence about year-round school and its link to higher achievement is inconclusive, studies consistently reveal that year-round students score higher on certain assessments than those students who attend schools with traditional nine-month calendars.

Explanation:

Any argumentative editorial should always maintain a respectful tone to convey a point positively and affirmatively, based on evidence rather than personal believes or opinions. A counterargument should not attack those who differ from our position but provide evidence to disprove their claims.

Phrases such as "these people need to open their eyes", "they would admit defeat if only they would do their research", and "these people need to study their facts" are baseless accusations of researchers not doing their jobs properly. The best way to make a counterclaim against the opposite idea would be to establish supporting evidence, which is accomplished with the phrase "studies consistently reveal that".

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"Those cookies were yummy I ate three of them today!" sentence fragment
complete sentence run-on sentence

What is the shape of the box that Kevin has made for Max’s gift?

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Answer the following questions
1. Why was confidentiality important for both Debbie and Michael?

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Use the phrase to answer the question After hours of waiting for the bowling alley to open, Which clause best completes the sentence to create a pun? (1 point)
A.we finally got the ball rolling. B. we went to the movies instead. C. We were starving. D. we found out it was closed for good.​

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A3. Find out antonyms from the passage for the following:
(i) shortest X
(ii) increasing X
(iii) irregular X
iv) ended X​

How does the article "Caring for Vets Should Be National Duty" develop the central ideas that the VA Mission Act is a step in the right direction and that the law will not be enough to improve care for veterans?

1.by explaining how the law will improve conditions for veterans and emphasizing the shortcomings of the law
2.by describing the conditions that led to the law being passed and including statistics that show the law will fail
3.by explaining how the law was passed and describing what the next law passed should include
4.by explaining how many people will benefit from the law and describing how some people will not benefit.

Obama believes that using force is justified when...
A
you can guarantee there will be few causalities.
B
it helps prevent greater human suffering in the
future.
C С
the people support the goals of their military.
D
there is no risk of civilians being injured.

Select ALL of the prepositional phrases found in the
following sentence.

Down the streets and alleys jogged the owner in search of her
lost pet.

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What are the differences between video games and basketball?

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Which detail from "Malala the Powerful" conveys the central idea that Malala stood up to the Taliban?
"She wrote about her dream of becoming a doctor one day, her fears of the terrorists, and her
O fierce determination to get the education she needed, no matter what the Taliban did or how
afraid she was."
"Malala and her classmates stopped wearing their school uniforms and began hiding their
books under their clothing."
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"The Taliban soon took credit for the assassination attempt, saying it was a warning to other
girls not to follow Malala's example."
"Attendance at Malala's school decreased by more than 60 percent. But what could Malala
do? What could one girl do but watch helplessly as her freedoms were taken away?"

Guess the meaning of the following words from context and match them with their definitions.

1. to refer___
2. to apply___
3. internship___
4. achivements___
5. upon request___
6. salutation___
7.to determine__
8.knowledge__

a)short job that a student does to gain experience
b) Word or phrase used at the beginning of a letter
c) Word or phrase used at the end of a letter
d) information gained through experience
e) on the receipt of a formal demand for something
f) successes that you have had
g) to find out the facts about something
h) to make a formal request, usually written
i) to mention or speak about someone or something
j) to use a particular name or title when writing to someone​

think about the different organization structures you can use to develop your essay briefly explain what structure you will use

After going to work he will go to the market.

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What kinds of modern products and services do you think would be popular in Shakespeare’s time - even though they were not around, then?

As you read “A Sound of Thunder,” notice how Bradbury's choice of words, imagery, and figurative language creates a unique style. Describe the effect it has on you as you read. Be specific. Cite places in the story where you get caught up in it.

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Do you think people face internal conflict or external conflict more often in their daily lives. Write an argumentative essay explaining which one you think we face more in our daily lives.

Why is Mowgli's response unusual?
What does the response indicate to Bagheera?
Then something began to hurt Mowgli inside him, as he
had never been hurt in his life before, and he caught his
breath and sobbed, and the tears ran down his face.
"What is it? What is it?" he said. "I do not wish to leave
the jungle, and I do not know what this is. Am I dying,
Bagheera?"
"No, Little Brother. Those are only tears such as men
use," said Bagheera. "Now I know thou art a man, and a
man's cub no longer. The jungle is shut indeed to thee
henceforward. Let them fall, Mowgli; they are only tears.
So Mowgli sat and cried as though his heart would break;
and he had never cried in all his life before.
-"Mowgli's Brothers, " The Jungle Book,
Rudyard Kipling

Which sentence contains an example of precise language?

According to this map, which of the following regions are least likely to experience outbreaks of the plague? a. cold and densely populated regions b. warm and densely populated regions c. warm and sparsely populated regions d. cold and sparsely populated regions

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culture that a religion.*
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Buddhism
Hinduism
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Shintoism
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Identify the type of clause in the parentheses in sentence below.

The job market should convalesce (as soon as the economy begins to recover.)

A. noun clause

B. independent clause

C. relative clause

D. adverbial clause

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